Feedback for how to improve first draught front cover

I asked a number of people on ways to improve my first front cover draught and this was the feedback I was given:

Feedback from Miss Gingles (Media Studies Tutor):
"I think the magazine cover looks really promising, but to improve it further, I would maybe edit the main image to make the red lipstick stand out more. Perhaps making the rest of the photo black and white will help to acheive that and also might make the magazine look more Indie to suit the target audience."

Feedback from Sam Scholey:
" I would change the peach colour to make the red lipstick colour stand out more, and also to make the magazine more appealing to both males and females, as it looks like a magazine more aimed at females. to make the magazine look more indie aswell, in the sticker on the bottom right hand corner, I would maybe put a daisy in the background to give it more of an Indie feel and make it more appealing to it's target audience."