"I like the contents page, it has a funky style fitting to the needs of your chosen target audience. I think its fresh and innovative and gives clear information and a clear outline to the structure and the content of the magazine. I think the photographs are where the main improvements need to be made. The photos need to be seperated out and have a little border inbetween them, as they all sort of merge together and look like one big photo. the photos also need to include a tagline, just so it is as clear as possible what photos link to what stories of the magazine. Also, in comparison with the front cover, the green colour is a slightly different shade, just make sure they match perfeclty, and maybe add another photo or a tagline to the white space next to the main image just to make the page ass full as possible, but other than that, I think this is a good contents page and looks like it is from the same magazine as your front cover."
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