Feedback from Mrs Kalyan:
"To improve this I would add something to the pink box in the top left, it looks a bit empty so you could maybe add something there or get rid of it altogether. Another thing I would say is to somehow merge the top of the persons head to be infront on the title, as this is quite typical on a magazine cover for the main image to merge over the mast head slightly. Another thing I would suggest is to outline the mast head with the same colour as the pink box to maintain more of a theme."
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